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The following is a poor example of the organizational start to a paper about Albert Einstein.

Albert Einstein and His Life

There was this scientist who escaped Germany to work on the atomic bomb. He was a great guy and contributed to science is such a great way. This paper will talk about his life.

 

Below is a revision of the same paper using organization, one of the 6 traits.

Einstein, His Life and E=MC².

Science is the study of biology, physics and chemistry, and how these disciplines interact with each other in the world we live in.  There have been many great scientists who have contributed well to our societies, but the most influential of them all, in my opinion, was Albert Einstein. This paper will examine his early life, his difficulties as an aspiring scientist in Pre-Nazi Europe, his escape to the West, and the development of his famous theorem E=MC².  Without the hard work and brilliance of his findings, the atomic and thermal worlds would still be in the Dark Ages.  e hard work and brilliance of his findings, the atomic and thermal worlds would still be in the Dark Ages.

 
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